Ivar Timewalker Issue 5 Mini-Review
This issue feels like it could have used a little more polish on the script. The two problems I found are some places where either the dialogue or scene changes needed to be different. On the scene front it is just a matter of which scene leads into which. As for the dialogue there are just a few parts that feel unnatural in how they are said. Though the issue as a whole is great and one I recommend.