Fair Voyage Ch.3 An Independent Comic by Andrea Bell Review With Spoilers

Warning Of Spoilers!

  This issue has several grammar errors and at least one spelling error. The art is on par with the previous issues, except for an iffy in-story wanted poster. I say it is iffy since the character Ace apparently was involved in its creation and so the bent arm may have been related to his feelings. Speaking of Ace this story felt rushed towards a possible conclusion of either the story or just this arc involving Ace. Finally I think that Andrea Bell needs to watch out for characters meeting for the first time finishing the other's sentences. Not to mention referencing information that has not been said or shown before. The examples being the strategy session mention of the bridge and the ancient greeting used by the mom.

   Overall this is a pretty decent issue, but not one I can recommend due to the number of problems.

Comments

Popular posts from this blog

Archer & Armstrong American Pale Ale Opinion Piece 2

Buffy The Vampire Slayer Season 11 Issue 7 Review With Spoilers

Buffy The Vampire Slayer Season 11 Issue 1 Review With Spoilers